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Mother, Nehiyaw, Metis, & Itisahwâkan – career communicator. This is my collection of opinions, stories, and the occasional rise to, or fall from, challenge. In other words, it's my party, I can fun if I want to. Artwork by aaronpaquette.net

Minute Misery; Haiku

Posted on November 21, 2017 by Blog Woman!!!

Forlorn longing sighs
Spring’s promises to Summer
Pivot toward dark

Weak, last ditch appeals to Sun
Spring promised; prolong our youth

RL

Haiku/Tanka

Inspiration & Photo credit: Autumn Alps by Le Drake Noir

7 thoughts on “Minute Misery; Haiku”

calmkate on November 25, 2017 at 08:03 said:

Very Poignant!

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- Blog Woman!!! on November 27, 2017 at 11:00 said:
  
  Aw, thanks, Kate. Nice to see you. Saw you took some time on other adventures for a bit.
  
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  - calmkate on November 27, 2017 at 17:30 said:
    
    Yes still away n busy but will be back blogging in a few weeks. Keep up the good work.
    
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davidthestoryteller on February 10, 2018 at 15:20 said:

I love these kinds of poems! And the background picture is beautiful!

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- Blog Woman!!! on June 2, 2018 at 08:34 said:
  
  Thanks so much.
  
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aruna3 on May 26, 2018 at 10:26 said:

Don’t worry.spring always remeber his promise.word”forlorn”reminds me about d great poet Keats.wonderful Haiku.

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- Blog Woman!!! on June 2, 2018 at 08:34 said:
  
  Thank you – for your visit and kind words.
  
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