First Thought

morning bliss I am the first thought
On his mind as daybreak blinks
Sunday morning bliss…

 Gently smudging pain’s traces
Sweetly replacing wishes


Haiku / Tanka
Inspired by the artwork of: and prompted by:

About Blog Woman!!!

Once in a while I can rock a thought. I simply believe in what I stand up for. I'd most like people to know that surviving the trials of mountains and monsters is more than resilience - it’s a path to your destiny. On a mostly weekly basis I throw out a grab-bag of facts, ideas or creativity; like a box of chocolates wrapped in ribbons of occasional profanity.... In other words, it's my party I can fun if I want to. So, waddya say, can we talk?
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5 Responses to First Thought

  1. sandrahenderson9011 says:

    You have beautiful work. I haven’t been brave enough to post mine yet as I feel my ideas might be a little too flat. What’s your process like? How do you get to that place that makes you say this is good enough?


    • Ooooh, that’s a big question, Sandra! Firstly, I’d say that I write for myself. So, that pretty much sands down the judging edges of ‘good enough’ for anyone else. I think most of us are our own toughest critics anyway, so when you get on the point of your work where you feel it’s finished, then just take a deep breath and hit publish. If someone else likes it, that’s the sparkly sprinkles on the cake, right? Because you’ve already baked and iced the whole cake.

      It’s also about what you write and there is so much in our own life that could be used for any type of writing genre. I often write my experiences from various aspects of it. Sometimes one incident will give me 10 posts. Same thing with ongoing events, when you can see another view of them, write it down. Good luck with your writing and thanks so much for your visit.

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  2. The Hook says:

    Loved this, Robyn.
    Well done.

    Liked by 1 person

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